Monday, March 7, 2011

What I already know about my topic

When a child grows up with living in four homes over the course of two weeks, they no longer function and trust the ones they love.  They wonder where they will stay that night or who their real family is, and it is all because their loved ones made and make stupid decisions.  When a child grows up hearing anger and yelling and fighting, they will most likely turn to an object or person in which they know there is no anger and hatred in their voice.  However, all children who do not have caring and stability in their life will see everything and everyone differently.  They may not trust someone or ever feel that they can ever be loved.  They may think that, that is the way of life and that is how you treat your children or family members or friends.  I want to know just how these people will develop later on in life.

1 comment:

  1. you know alot about your topic. I see nothing flawless about your paragaph. you did everything right. you had good trasision words and great sentence strucher.

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